8 Chargers Make Pro Bowl

Dear Ow,

Thanks for your sports  posting.

As one of the NowPublic editors, I’ve flagged your item as Incomplete. From what I could tell you had written a headline, and a darn good one it is...but there was nothing else.

One suggestion is to check out NowPublic news values and what you can do to make your stuff better. Even a few words on the 8 Who Made It would have really helped.

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