Do you think you could fill in some details, like, what this news story is about. Could you provide some information about what is new that you are presenting, who it impacts, when the comet is likely to hit Planet Earth, or, if your story is not about comets, or mutual funds, Perpetual Motion Machines, or the like, can you at least provide some hints as to your subject? Usually news is about something new about something people might care about. Binoculars? should we be concerned, frightened, depressed?
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at 01:02 on December 7th, 2006
Hello Windiepink -
Do you think you could fill in some details, like, what this news story is about. Could you provide some information about what is new that you are presenting, who it impacts, when the comet is likely to hit Planet Earth, or, if your story is not about comets, or mutual funds, Perpetual Motion Machines, or the like, can you at least provide some hints as to your subject? Usually news is about something new about something people might care about. Binoculars? should we be concerned, frightened, depressed?