Hi TeacherDude, thanks for the post which updates your previous story. I did want to mention, however, that when quoting from external sources, we encourage contributors to use the Highlight tool to excerpt portions of text for further discussion, rather than simply cutting and pasting entire articles verbatim. Your post would also benefit from the addition of your own comments and perspective, both to personalize it and to provide further context. Thanks for your attention!
at 13:42 on March 24th, 2008
Hi TeacherDude, thanks for the post which updates your previous story. I did want to mention, however, that when quoting from external sources, we encourage contributors to use the Highlight tool to excerpt portions of text for further discussion, rather than simply cutting and pasting entire articles verbatim. Your post would also benefit from the addition of your own comments and perspective, both to personalize it and to provide further context. Thanks for your attention!