Man this has got to be the most sloppy written review I have ever read. I think you should take a few writing for web courses before you write another badly written review.
Its fine to write a bad review, everyone is entitled to their opinion but at least write it correctly. Here are some articles that might help you out:
Review these and maybe you will be ready to write another article.
I was actually there that night and had a great time. But I went there with an open mind wanting to have a good time, unlike you. Everyone I saw had a great time.
Oddly you sound like a very jealous drag queen that doesn't have any connections to put on any event.
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at 11:23 on May 21st, 2008
Man this has got to be the most sloppy written review I have ever read. I think you should take a few writing for web courses before you write another badly written review.
Its fine to write a bad review, everyone is entitled to their opinion but at least write it correctly. Here are some articles that might help you out:
http://www.ehow.com/how_2059769_write-concert-review.html
http://www.ormtatoronto.org/events/review.html
Review these and maybe you will be ready to write another article.
I was actually there that night and had a great time. But I went there with an open mind wanting to have a good time, unlike you. Everyone I saw had a great time.
Oddly you sound like a very jealous drag queen that doesn't have any connections to put on any event.
Good luck with your studies.