azzayindia, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I'm actually not sure what this story is about, at all. It would be great if you could give some explanation, along with some context and perhaps a small highlight from the article itself. Thanks!
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at 04:25 on May 15th, 2008
azzayindia, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story.
I'm actually not sure what this story is about, at all. It would be great if you could give some explanation, along with some context and perhaps a small highlight from the article itself. Thanks!