secondcello, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
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at 15:09 on June 12th, 2008
secondcello, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
This is not really a news story.