Cogs and Sprockets

by art2chokeheart | December 11, 2008 at 09:07 am
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That's what everyone here looks like to me. Places to go, people to see. Everyone has an agenda. This place is a huge machine.



The first thing you see when you get here is nothing but a tunnel shooting a train to nowhere. There are a million of those things. Moving, moving, pushing along.  Its an entirely different city, each stop. I already know there are a million places I dont want to be, just by looking at the people that get off, and on at certain stops.  All of them work at some factory, making sure the lids are sealed on jars. 



 


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Jarrett Martineau
Jarrett Martineau
flagged this story as Needs Improvement

at 09:28 on December 11th, 2008

art2chokeheart, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. Please review our FAQ or check out our J-Tips for more help posting to NowPublic.

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