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Emily Delphi | August 29, 2008 at 12:54 am
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Daddy's Home is a humorous commentary on today's family life, with an emphasis on the role of the modern father, through the eyes of a
stay-at-home-dad. With a growing circulation of more than 4 million, it is published in leading newspapers around the world including The Washington Post and The Orange County Register.
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at 01:12 on August 29th, 2008
Emily Delphi, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)