jwag57, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. Please use the highlight tool when referencing external sources. Also the invitation to continue reading the article at a different site is link spam, please consider revising the text as using the highlight tool automatically provides a link back to the source.
Here is the link to the highlight tool page, http://my.nowpublic.com/newsroom/tools/highlight/highlight
If you need any help please let me know.




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at 11:04 on February 9th, 2009
I submitted it new with the highlight tool. I actually had it already but had just forgotten about it. I will use it from now on. Thanks you.