kamell, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I grabbed the first few paragraphs from those links and pasted them into google and a number of other pages came up with the exact phrasing. Would you please let us know where you got your information from, or post the sources on your page?
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at 06:08 on December 14th, 2007
kamell, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I grabbed the first few paragraphs from those links and pasted them into google and a number of other pages came up with the exact phrasing. Would you please let us know where you got your information from, or post the sources on your page?