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Play President For Me

by nancyvideo | February 8, 2008 at 08:09 am

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Democrat candidates have learned that to get elected, they must rely on form, not substance.

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Rob Walker

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at 08:40 on February 8th, 2008

nancyvideo, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

Jarrett Martineau

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at 08:49 on February 8th, 2008

Hi nancyvideo, thanks for contributing, however, I'm having trouble figuring out what is newsworthy about this story. I would recommend that you review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might also want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)