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In today’s session we meet a navy pilot called Alex. Alex is played by
Blair Underwood and is deeply troubled about something that happened to
him. He has a thing about perfection and finds anyone who doesn’t
conform to his strange elitist version of perfection beneath him. The
trouble goes deeper than that. Alex won’t admit it at first, but his
marriage is in deep trouble as well.
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at 15:39 on February 8th, 2008
range, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
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