at 14:42 on October 3rd, 2007
jetjet, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. Although your story may be newsworthy if presented properly; however just posting a headline is not sufficient.
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