micfitz, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
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at 16:16 on October 5th, 2008
micfitz, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)