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At a very young age I learned how freeing it is to move my body to music. The muscle control and rhythm came naturally to me. I used to beg my parents and their guests to watch my performances. And my brother would scream at me to “STOP DANCING” whenever a lively commercial came on TV. But it wasn’t until I was in my early twenties that I truly found the dancing soul within me.
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Orato
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at 20:57 on August 7th, 2007
Orato, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)