Beyond the White Beach of Boracay
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Catherine Pablico | March 13, 2008 at 09:55 pm
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If you're not spending 90 percent of your time in the temperate water of
Boracay resort island, you must be doing something wrong, or dirty at their
Boracay hotel
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at 22:03 on March 13th, 2008
Catherine Pablico, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered. I feel your article just reads a little bit too much like an ad.
at 23:15 on March 13th, 2008
thanks. might try that.