JELD-WEN, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
Thanks so much for the reference help, still playing around and trying to figure things out. Hopefully it'll all come together soon. :-) Looking to update...
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at 15:02 on June 18th, 2008
JELD-WEN, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 15:29 on June 18th, 2008
Thanks so much for the reference help, still playing around and trying to figure things out. Hopefully it'll all come together soon. :-) Looking to update...
at 15:56 on June 18th, 2008
No problem Jeld-Wen, drop me a line if you have any questions.