clixy, your story seems incomplete. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.) Thanks!
clixy, this story needs further writing and explanation to make it newsworthy. Please review What Makes News News and check out our J-Tips for more help. Also, the story should be posted in World and not Environment. Thanks.
February 19, 2008 at 07:52 pm by clixy, 144 views, 2 comments
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at 20:30 on February 19th, 2008
clixy, your story seems incomplete. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.) Thanks!
at 20:31 on February 19th, 2008
clixy, this story needs further writing and explanation to make it newsworthy. Please review What Makes News News and check out our J-Tips for more help. Also, the story should be posted in World and not Environment. Thanks.