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An April article in the "Hisdustani Times" indicated that the #2 cause of death in India is Tuberculosis. With pollution this serious, how can a child grow up unaffected?
May 15, 2008 at 07:49 pm by HoneyAmber, 107 views, 1 comment
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at 20:18 on May 15th, 2008
HoneyAmber, thanks for your post - I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
For the benefit of our readers, it helps if you say in your headline what the story is about. And could you tell us a bit more about what you have read and provide the link to the Hindustani Times article using our Highlight tool?
Many thanks