drps, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
drps, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I know you have link to a blog, but do you think you would be able to post a bit more here?
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at 08:25 on May 16th, 2008
drps, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 20:12 on May 16th, 2008
Thanks for the suggestions. I appreciate your valuable inputs.
at 11:37 on May 16th, 2008
drps, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I know you have link to a blog, but do you think you would be able to post a bit more here?