California Diabetes Foundation

by diabts01 | September 22, 2008 at 08:21 am
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California Diabetes Foundation is a Southern California based non-profit organization, established with the aims of creating awareness of the emerging national epidemic of the new millennium - Diabetes among the general population.

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Terri Potratz
Terri Potratz
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at 09:59 on September 22nd, 2008

diabts01, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story.  Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

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diabts01

What improvements do you expect in this story. This story is surely a news worthy story.  The story describes about diabetes

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