consciousmidwifery, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement.
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I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
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at 15:05 on June 20th, 2008
consciousmidwifery, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement.
There is no text or pictures in this story. Please provide the story with some content.
I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)