arenak89, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
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at 06:16 on September 3rd, 2008
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Micheal (not verified)
at 12:15 on October 16th, 2008
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at 12:29 on June 16th, 2008
arenak89, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 06:16 on September 3rd, 2008
I think the news does encompass the current stuff: as it seeks to defy the authenticity of hgh oral sprays, this is the most recent development in the world of HGH supplementation. There are thousands of companies that just blindly market their oral sprays and people fall onto such scams. So, if someone exposes all those companies, it's gonna be truth revealing current stuff.
at 12:15 on October 16th, 2008
I agree, It needs improvemenet. There are many sites on this topic but one of my favorites is the one called hghlook.com. The info is down to earth and very true.