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by Davis21 | April 2, 2008 at 03:44 am
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Kickboxing at Karmaa, the premier Martial Arts, Health and Fitness club in London provides mixture of Karate, oriental kicking and punching, and western boxing. It combines self-defence, aerobic workout, flexibility, coordination & speed.
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at 04:12 on April 2nd, 2008
Davis21, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 07:51 on July 23rd, 2009
The opening sounds interesting that there is a place in London with a mixture of fighting styles.
How long as the place been in operation?
Who are the founders of the operation?
Is it a not-for-profit society or a business?
Who are some trainees that have competed in some form of fighting competition and where have these competitions taken place?
The opening statement is like a lead left jab in a boxing competition. It may score a point, but to score a knockout with the "Now Public" audience we need a few hooks, crosses and uppercuts with a touch of fancy footwork and body movement.