Time To Say Goodbye…

by rickey21 | June 19, 2008 at 01:22 pm
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Today is my last day working at the Brampton Civic Hospital, at William Osler Health Centre. I am leaving for many reasons, though one of the biggest is that I will be working closer to home.

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at 13:24 on June 19th, 2008

rickey21, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

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Heiky

rickey21, I hope you'll enjoy your new job! I wish you all the best.

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