MUSTANGPC, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I can't tell anything about the context of these images, as there is no supporting text. Also, I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story.
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at 12:12 on June 6th, 2007
MUSTANGPC, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I can't tell anything about the context of these images, as there is no supporting text. Also, I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story.
Please review What Makes News News. Thanks!