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Karate and Pilates studio is serving Hillsboro and Beaverton, Oregon

by senpaiheather | April 30, 2007 at 12:54 pm

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My name is Heather Forsberg, owner of Enshinkai Martial Arts and fitness. We're offering instuction in Enshin karate. If you've never heard of Enshin Karate, now is a great time to check it out. It's a style of karate that's little more practical than you might have seen before. Come by and try a free week, just to see if you like it!

I also offer pilates lessons to those interested in fitness. I'm fully certified through the PhysicalMind institute in NY, and would love to show you how pilates can help you lose weight, and tone your body!

For more information, please visit www.enshinkai.com

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Actual News Geezer

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at 13:09 on April 30th, 2007

senpaiheather, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement.

I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

First thing - we could really use a Enshin Karate reporter. We don't have one, as far as I know one. To be a reporter, you need to keep us posted with what's new in the field.

Sure, it's ok if you promote your own business at the same time - but it helps to be very transparent about it - as you have done.

Essentially, I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

Anyway, welcome to NowPublic. Seriously consider what I said about becoming our Enshin Karate reporter.