astroleni, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
It would be a good idea to write what the story is about so people know what they're clicking on. Thanks!
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at 15:03 on January 11th, 2008
astroleni, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
It would be a good idea to write what the story is about so people know what they're clicking on. Thanks!