dawny, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. If you are trying to highlight something please read the instructions for the highlight tool - and share with us some of your own thoughts. Check out our j-tips and news values<
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at 11:01 on July 27th, 2007
dawny, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. If you are trying to highlight something please read the instructions for the highlight tool - and share with us some of your own thoughts. Check out our j-tips and news values<