Kyll3r, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. There is no content to this story - if you had a techincal problem with posting it please contact me at rnadel(at)nowpublic(dot)com.
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at 21:40 on August 4th, 2007
Kyll3r, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. There is no content to this story - if you had a techincal problem with posting it please contact me at rnadel(at)nowpublic(dot)com.