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Jannat Review
Today, Jannat has been released. A movie aboutcricket, love, betrayal, gambling and match fixing. Want to know more? Checkout the review.
May 16, 2008 at 10:03 am by dhakamehdi, 17 views, 1 comment
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j_bonkowskiat 10:14 on May 16th, 2008
dhakamehdi, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
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