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oman,alamrat road,after gonu cyclon

by antoine | June 10, 2007 at 07:50 am

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sultanate of oman,muscat,almrat city road after the cyclon gonu left,there was a highway there,everything is gone with the floods comming from the high mountains,in 2002 when i came to oman it was a one way road,it tooks 2 years to develop it.

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Rob Walker

at 09:24 on June 10th, 2007

You should really delete this news story and re-write it from scratch. I have absolutely no idea what is going on, your headline isn't even english and the text in your 'story' is illegible. There appear to be words just outright missing. If you're not a native english speaker, perhaps sending your stories to someone who speaks the language first would help?

Also, the constant use of ellipses (for example...too many of...these...for no reason...) is just poor writing. I frankly have no idea what's going on, even with the pictures.

antoine

at 21:04 on June 10th, 2007

rob,i have a bad connection even my pc is functioning strange,i did not wrote all what was there,and i'm not a native english speaker as u said,but i'm trying to communicate,and i did not address the storie to u,if u like or no this is ur opinion that i respect,also i think that there another way to criticize people Mr "walker".