One of rural Sri Lankan farmer in the cyber space

by technovi | August 16, 2007 at 09:25 am
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  A year later there  was a poor teenager called Indrajith in the
society Those days he was arraying to find a occupation But he  was not
succeeded  Then we asked him to join with us and he became  a student of TechnoVillage,Pitakumbura,Bibila
in Sri Lanka up to now. Apart from he is a paddy farmer of this village and now
he has a web site and even a blog site.Visit his website and  we will encourage him

 

            His URL is    www.TechnoVillage.org/indrajith.htm

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Rob Walker
Rob Walker
flagged this story as Needs Improvement

at 12:02 on August 16th, 2007

technovi, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.


There is a lot of garbage text before the actual story, as well as grammatical errors that make the story very difficult to read. I understand english may not be your first language, if you're still having trouble we'd be happy to help with this.


Fix these things and maybe add some quotes from Indrajith's website and you'll have an excellent story, there's a lot of potential here!

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technovi

Dear Rob Walker,

I appreciate your interest on the topic.By using  limited resources we have at  our village and they are struggling to improve their skills in English and ICT aswel.

How exciting if we could get your assistance us! 

I will assist our children to remove innecessary text etc and we are kindly appreciate your comments on this regard.

 

Kind Regards,

 

Technovi

 

 

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Jordan Yerman

A quick trick to get rid of that extra stuff that appears in the story is to compose it in Notepad, Wordpad or any ASCII text program and then paste it in. Word likes to add a bunch of metadata that appears as text when posted to NowPublic!

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technovi

Welcome

Kind regards,

Technovi

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