BBC - CBeebies - Storiesand Rhymes

by mahebabu | November 23, 2007 at 01:48 am

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Listen to or read the story as Kevin and Spanner explore space and search for planets.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/cbeebies/stories/

mahebabu, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

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i hope are u watching e awards toda

First Flagged at 2:01 AM, Nov 23, 2007 by ifindtrends

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