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Rehman Malik, the advisor to the Prime Minister on the interior issueshas really geared up for his real tasks of showing muscles to the foesand friends. Now it’s no secret that he is the Dirty Boy for the AsifAli Zardari.
May 14, 2008 at 02:18 pm by pakspectator, 102 views, 1 comment
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at 15:38 on May 14th, 2008
pakspectator, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story.
I think this post would benefit from more context and background. Also please mark opinion pieces as opinion pieces in the headline or at the beginning of the text. You should also tag the post as an opinion.
News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)