Interesting, but I need to ask you if you're in any wayaffiliated with the company you've mentioned? If you are - this is considered spam by Now Public Policy and I'll ask you to remove it.
If not - how about adding some details about Javea for your readers?
Have you ever been there?
What makes this company interesting to you?
Show a little of your personality in your presentation, along with just a cut and paste - then it becomes a real report! :)
I'll come back in the morning to see if I can flag this as GOOD STUFF for you.
javea32, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
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at 23:02 on January 27th, 2008
Hello Javea,
Interesting, but I need to ask you if you're in any way affiliated with the company you've mentioned? If you are - this is considered spam by Now Public Policy and I'll ask you to remove it.
If not - how about adding some details about Javea for your readers?
Have you ever been there?
What makes this company interesting to you?
Show a little of your personality in your presentation, along with just a cut and paste - then it becomes a real report! :)
I'll come back in the morning to see if I can flag this as GOOD STUFF for you.
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at 04:58 on January 28th, 2008
javea32, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)