thinktank, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
Hey Thinktank, you need a little more information than that I think, for your story. And if you're just soliciting opinions, we've got this great opinion category.
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at 05:26 on November 16th, 2007
thinktank, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
Hey Thinktank, you need a little more information than that I think, for your story. And if you're just soliciting opinions, we've got this great opinion category.
at 14:42 on February 26th, 2008
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