Sexual Perversions in the News

by jetjet | September 26, 2007 at 11:48 am
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babblingdweeb
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flagged this story as Needs Improvement

at 12:09 on September 26th, 2007

jetjet, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. Maybe add some thoughts from the original article, or highlight part of the article here. 

I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

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