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uusjio | August 31, 2007 at 08:58 pm
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Jakarta (ANTARA News) - The Indonesian Foreign Affairs Ministry has so
far not received any report about the drowning of an Indonesian sailor
in Israel, a spokesman said.
"I have yet to receive any report, and we have no representative there
(Israel)," Director for Protection of Indonesian Citizens and Corporate
Bodies, Teguh Wardoyo, said here Friday night.
More at antara.co.id
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at 21:01 on August 31st, 2007
uusjio, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
Again... try downloading th NP highlight tool www.nowpublic.com/highlight. The tool allows you to bring outside sources into nowpublic and incorporate them into your own stories and analysis.
at 01:34 on September 1st, 2007
Thanks a lot!