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at 12:11 on February 29th, 2008
Hi red_ranger, I think the story would benefit from further explanation. Leaving your sentence with simply "and..." makes it difficult to follow. I would suggest adding some additional text to provide context and clarity. Thanks.
at 12:56 on February 29th, 2008
I did it in purpose because the whole story leads to my blog...My blog consist of new video games collection that tackles reviews, video gameplays, trailers. I'm sorry for the hanging explanation of it. Thanks and I would not like to be label it as spam, I'm just a blogger who gives you stories about the video gaming industry.
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Hi red_ranger, I think the story would benefit from further explanation....
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