lovemorgul, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. I think this is newsworthy, but the way it is presented is incompletee. Can you please provide a synopsis to the story in your own words, with your take on things, what you find interesting, and then maybe add highlights from the source. Thanks.
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