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Staff from Renaissance Riverside Hotel Saigon visited Long Hoa Orphanage School in District 7 for the mid-autumn festival. Around 500 kids from the school and surrounding areas were delighted by the appearance of two Vietnamese legends - Chi Hang and Chu Cuoi. The staff were kept busy allocating seats and keeping order during the performance. The Renaissance Hotel also donated five awards to outstanding students. The hotel staff, aided by the Penguin group, also provided entertain ment and food, drinks and festival lanterns. Over 70 expatriates and associates of the Renaissance Hotel helped with donations. This is the third event organized by the Renaissance Riverside for Long Hoa School and donations of clothes, computer equipment and duvet covers were much appreciated.
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