fashionmag, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
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Singer Katy Perry was rocking in some very tight pants and a Hello Kitty top arriving at the Brit Awards 2009.Her top has been designed by The Blonds to raise money for The Educational Foundation for the Fashion Industries and it`s currently on Ebay,the corset is cute, very J-pop. It takes a certain personality to wear something like 

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