Part of a Story...

Alright, I wrote this fraction of a story a while ago...tell me if you like it.

"Wake-up! Come on, don't make me late again!" Yelled eight year old Haley Rowen. Haley is the younger sister of Jake Rowen. Every morning since he had turned twelve, she had to take ten precious minutes of her morning to wake him up. This never happened when he was eleven! Haley thought. She was banging on Jakes door. "Come on!" Haley turned the door handle and tacked Jake on his bed. "Hey, little creep, get off! Why do you like school so much?" Jake yelled. "Maybe I want to be smart, you big mess up!" Haley said roling her eyes and slapping back and forth on his face. Haley gave up and jumped off of Jakes bed. "BYE" she said with harsh tone. Haley ran to this kitchen, grabbed her lunch, and ran out the door. "See ya, mom!" Haley yelled on her way out as she jumped on her old skateboard. Haley was a pro at skateboarding. She ollied off the curb. The wheels were still spinning so she tried to do  a manual but landed on her knees. "Whoa" Haley said softly. She spotted a silver ring near the edge of a gutter. "Cool!" Haley said. The ring was round and plain but very shiny. Haley picked it up and placed it in her palm...