VIDEO PREMIERE! Day 26 - Got Me Going

yes, exactky what should i do on my next post?

Perhaps I can help a bit:

• An introductory paragraph would make it easier for people to figure out what the story is about. Personally I didn't understand the title and didn't realize that the link would take me to a music video. It would be great if you started with a short paragraph mentioning those points along with some indication of why you are excited about this particular video.
• Normally the highlighted area with the link to the original article contains some highlighted text. Normally you would visit the original article in your browser, drag your cursor over some text to highlight it, then click on the button for the highlight software. The text you highlighted would then appear in the gray box in the NowPublic article. In this case, though, there isn't much text in the linked page - so I'm not sure how you would handle that. For sure a good candidate would be the rather terse Description text in the right panel of the page. Of course you could highlight some of the text of one of the comments. Perhaps a NowPublic editor can help with that.

I hope this helps,
Take Care,
Sam.