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June 26, 2008 at 04:42 pm by garysobers01, 209 views, 1 comment
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at 17:49 on June 26th, 2008
garysobers01, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag. I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered. Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
Please, elaborate more on your story.