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at 14:16 on December 31st, 2007
laptopcomputer, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
HP, Toshiba, etc. have giant PR departments and are quite able to post their new models as they come out.
If it were a review or preview I could maybe see it, but you're just posting the released specs. In the future, it might be better if you posted these in the Press Release category.
at 14:05 on August 19th, 2008
wel ive logged in but i have forgot my psword what shall i do?