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If you are a diver, chances are that you are interested in Ship Wrecks,
which scatter the oceans of the 7 seas. Ever since human beings sailed
the seven seas, ships went missing due to storms, enemies at war,
technical failure or just plain human error...
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at 05:46 on April 19th, 2007
nomad4ever, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
Gorgeous though the site is, I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.) I still have to get my dive cert...