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A look at what to expect after adjustable lap band surgery. Includes details about the lap band diet and the importance of protein.
http://www.womenshealth.about.com/od/fitnessandhealth/a/weightlosssurg_3.htm
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at 03:12 on July 24th, 2007
glord999, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
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