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At times, we may get so caught up with either work or school activities that it almost seems each of us is rushing in different directions both at the same time. A good vacation with your family is a good way to pull each of your family member closer via spending quality time together.
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at 09:28 on June 26th, 2008
homevacation, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)